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Friday, 27 October 2017

Persuasive.

This week we were doing persuasive writing. Here is my writing, it's about if sports is better than kapa haka. Have a read.


Sports is better than kapa haka.

To begin with I say kapa haka is better than sports because it helps with singing.


To start with kapa haka can help you with your confidence and it can help you with your discipline.


Secondly I say kapa haka is better because you can get fit by doing all the haka jumps and performing the haka your hardest.


Another reason kapa haka is better than sports is that you get to learn new songs, new haka and new action songs to perform to your family.


One thing I know for sure is kapa haka is better than sports because it helps with your confidence and discipline. You can get fit by doing haka jumps and performing the haka your hardest. You get to learn new songs, new haka and new action songs to perform to your family. all in all I say kapa haka is better than sports, what do you think?

2 comments:

  1. Working well with ideas, spelling, punctuation, structure and language. You need to add examples to your reasons. I wrote examples in your book to help you understand. You can also rewind the reasons and examples video. Or reread the exemplars. All these resources are on the class site / tuhituhi page. Kia kaha Waimirirangi.

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    1. Thank you for your feed back I will definitely take this feed back and use it to help me with my learning.

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