I am a student at Bay of Islands College in Kawakawa, New Zealand. This is a place where I share my learning.
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Monday, 20 March 2017
The Waimirirangi poem.
Hi, we were learning how to write metaphors. What i found hard was thinking of the sentences for my poem. What i found easy was finding the photos for my poems.My next learning step is to ask for help when i'm stuck and work on my metaphors.
I really enjoyed your poem but something for the future to remember is to use capitals where needed
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Waimirirangi love it
ReplyDeleteGreat poem waimirirangi your poem is awesome I like it.The writing is cool and the photos
ReplyDeleteE taku mokopuna, kātahi te rotarota pai ko tēnei. Tūkuru! :-)
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